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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
 Post Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:43 pm 
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well do you write songs they are pretty much songs in talking form lol

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I can't write poetry, I can write, draw, play guitar but I can in no way write poetry

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Hope you start feeling better soon, memorymogul!

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Yeah, i'm doing better my eyes are still red even though it's been weeks, it's so cool that it reminded you of Erec!!!

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Aw, I didn't know you went through that!

I hope you're all better now.

It was a really good poem. Sorry to bring it back to Erec, but the brightness after you first opened your eyes reminded me a little of when Erec firsts opens his eyes after being in the Nevervarld...


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Lol, yeah it does remind you of the book doesn't it, I just was on a writing rampage and it came to me lol...
here is another one:

Being Blind is not fun
Believe me i've had my run
The stitches
The pain...

The redness is scary
People just stare
Pink eye
no
I had surgery

I was blind for an hour
All I could do was hear
My mom beside me
Telling me not to
Worry
The Doctor said I will
Be Able to See.
And of course...
Do not worry!..

An hour later,
I struggle to open my eyes
I don't want to be blind!
The first thing i see...
The light was blinding

But now, the pain is gone
My eyes are better

No more needles in the eyes
No more trying not to cry
No more lazy eye

Stitches are leaving
The itches are decreasing
I never want to go through
that again
Never want to be blind...


This poem is about my resent experience, I had lazy eye surgery on both of my eyes and at first i couldn't see and i was freaking out and my eyes wouldn't open. My eyes are still red from the surgery, and this was my 3rd one and hopefully my last I hope you like my peom.

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October Fang - Those were awesome, thanks for posting them!!

And Memory Mogul - your poem rocks! Of course it made me think of Erec. Was that a coincidence? Love that last line!! :lol:

Happy Holidays!!

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No one can tell me what to do
I can't even too
My mind controlls me
The eyes show me
I'm destined for
Something...
It sing in my heart
I follow the truth
I'll find it and scream it
Arcross the oceans
All Blue
Through Darkness and Light
Over Mountains
Through The Cold Caves
Agaisnt the Most Brave
I will Fight my way
to find
The DEEP Destined TRUTH!

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 Post Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 11:39 pm 
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I love it so much!!

I think I like the word brainavation the best. It's perfect! :}


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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
 Post Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 12:48 am 
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I have a whole entire book of poetry that I have written since high school. Here is a sample of my poetry.
A Blank Piece of Paper[b]
A piece of paper is not blank anyore
if you write a word or two or three
How can you make it blank again? you ask.
This is what you do
just erase the words you wrote
and the paper will be as blank as new

[b]Worlds of Imagination

People are confusing cause
their changing and ther're moving.
Away from towns, and cities
trying to get to where they are living,
in a world of their imagination.
Were their lives are pure and every day equations,
during the gray and hazy days of aggravation.
They sit and wait for their lives to end
in a normal and every day situation.
Some have this sick and silly brainavation,
to try to rule the world and all its nations.
To be a king of all imagination
and control the thoughts of people regulations.
Yet any fool can figure out this configuation,
cause the world is in a constant repeating circulation.
Now if you can try to place me in confutation,
you might just see my pont of categorization,
in the world of my own imagination.

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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
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wish i could, but I'm no good :cry: :P


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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
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Hey everyone!

I've got some great poems to include on here. These are only two of them.

1.
A queen plays solid
A king plays bold
An ace plays sharp
A jack plays cold.
A joker does his jig
Above the twos and threes.
But what do they all play?
Will you tell me please?
--by Leon H. (ME!)

2.
I dreamt of one-thousand horses
I dreamt my father was a cat
I dreamt I was a dreamer
Practicing my dreaming act.
--by Leon H. (ME!)


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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
 Post Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 8:58 am 
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Hmm, I had to write one in my AP Composition class. I should be getting the poem back soon so I'll post it then.

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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
 Post Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 12:04 am 
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I especially like the last one - really good!!

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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
 Post Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 11:14 pm 
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Well in school we had to write a whole booklet of peoms lol it was fun!!!!! We wrote them in like every kind of peom so...
Here's some of my favorites!!!!!

Trees are the symballs
Symballs of life and family
Wind blows them around


(I'm abseced will Shakespeare lol)
Mr. William Shakespeare;
His plays brought people near.
His ideas were great,
That people were never late.


Just sitting there all alone,
Its story wanting to be heard,
The book wants to be read, be heard.
Doors open to different worlds.
Your imagination soars,
Stories about love, hate, princess, kings, and more…
Open a book and listen...
It’s yearning to be heard.


That's it for now, some of them are cheesy and not so good lol!

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