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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
 Post Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 8:15 pm 
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ah... crap. to all those of you who are awaiting the Erec Rex theme, i'm stumped and had to completely re-write the whole thing. it wasn't coming together. hope to have it up on my tube sometime this month. if anyone is interested, my channel is http://www.youtube.com/leaffystar19

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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
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i hate to say it, but neither can i. i'm having a crappy time recording it. the guitar part is too...um... sad-ish. i may even have to re-do the whole melody line. at least i have software i can mix it on now:) this is probably the hardest song i've written!

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awesome song! can't wait to hear it!

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Oh okay cool!

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you're in luck! i just started recording it tonight. i got the guitar tonight and i'm going to do vocals some time this week and make a lyrics or fan vid and upload it to my site. i'll send you the link. i would have had the link on my profile, except it won't let you use *.webs.com.

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I'm just interested to see how it turned out.

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actually... i got to work last night and got a guitar part all set up. (that's my main instrument). if u want i can still try to make some sheet music for you:)

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artery wrote:
That was really good! Do yhou think I could sometime hear the melody? I might be able to figure out an accompiament for piano. Also, I'm interested in hearing your other songs.


Maybe... depends on whether or not i can get a youtube account. the quality would be very bad, as my idea of a recording studio is a keyboard on my desk with a couple of guitars and an mp3 player with a recording function... yeesh. i've been working on it... i got the key: a flat, i think:)

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That was really good! Do yhou think I could sometime hear the melody? I might be able to figure out an accompiament for piano. Also, I'm interested in hearing your other songs.

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i've written poetry practically since i could write! this is sooo the topic for me! as of my current teen-hood, i prefer lyricism to poetry... i'll post my theme song I wrote for Erec Rex!:) it's got a tune... but i can't get accompanyment to it. it's called Believe. if anyone is interested in hearing any of my other songs, just say so!

Believe:

Someday I know that I'll be
Something more than what I seem.
But for now I'm just a speck in the dust.
Fear and anger's crowding me
But I know someday that I'll see
Through another's eyes.
And when I cry I'll hear your voice telling me

Chorus:

Believe in yourself and dreams will come true.
Know that your destiny is up to you.
Believe in yourself and know what it takes
To let go of your past mistakes.
Believe, just believe

All my days I've felt betrayed
By those that I thought loved me so dearly
But clearly there's still one more step to take.
And I'll make a change and rearrange myself.
And when I cry for help I hear you say

Back to Chorus

Bridge:

I'm feeling so lost in here
I'm ready to give up
But you tell me

Back to Chorus

give me some feedback, ok? my songs mean a lot to me:)

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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
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No guarantees though.

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Oooh!!! Exciting!


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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
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I have pretty much the opposite problem. I can never come up with a melody or harmony, but when I can, I can find lyrics. I guess all I'll be is a parody artist. WAIT! I actually have an idea for the contest!

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 Post subject: Re: Who here writes poetry?
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lol no I can't wight lyrics very well

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