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Author: | artery [ Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:44 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Peoms of all kinds... |
That's a really good poem. |
Author: | Kaza Kingsley [ Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:45 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Peoms of all kinds... |
That's really great. I just got back from a trip to the ocean, and something about it really refreshes me. Now I'm ready to get back into action! |
Author: | DragonPurr [ Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:00 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Peoms of all kinds... |
[color=#008080]LOL, I hear you. I have spent nearly my entire life 5+ miles from the Atlantic Ocean. As a child I lived at the beach or the pool. As an adult I rarely see either! The beach is a tourist destination in the summer time and chilly in the winter. I just never go down there... The local beaches lost my interest after I went to HI for 3 days in 1991. It's amazing how seeing those beaches and that water ruined the local beach for me... I'm a Pisces, so the water and I must have been meant for one another! My mom had me in a pool before I was a year old. Your poem is fantastic![/color] |
Author: | memorymogul [ Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:46 am ] |
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Thank you, growing up far away from the ocean... where it's cold too.... kind of makes me a more of land person |
Author: | DragonPurr [ Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:42 am ] |
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It's fantastic! The ending is appropriate for someone averse to swimming. I love to swim and used to dream about being a dolphin or mermaid. |
Author: | memorymogul [ Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:32 am ] |
Post subject: | Peoms of all kinds... |
Underwater [color=#000080]I want to breath in water, and feel it in my hair. I want to go down under, and not need the air. I want to explore a world, different from my own;[/color] [color=#0040BF]I want to twirl, and loop, and follow. The currents through the ocean blue.[/color] [color=#008000]Maybe I'll become a mermaid, and grow a scaly tail. I'll get to live in water, without a single care.[/color] [color=#BF0000]But then my lungs start to burn, and I have to get back to the air.[/color] (its kind of ironic that I wrote this because, I'm not a big fan of swimming lol) |
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