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 Post Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:44 pm 
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That's a really good poem.

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That's really great. I just got back from a trip to the ocean, and something about it really refreshes me. Now I'm ready to get back into action!


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LOL, I hear you. I have spent nearly my entire life 5+ miles from the Atlantic Ocean. As a child I lived at the beach or the pool. As an adult I rarely see either! The beach is a tourist destination in the summer time and chilly in the winter. I just never go down there... The local beaches lost my interest after I went to HI for 3 days in 1991. It's amazing how seeing those beaches and that water ruined the local beach for me...
I'm a Pisces, so the water and I must have been meant for one another! My mom had me in a pool before I was a year old.
Your poem is fantastic!


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Thank you, growing up far away from the ocean...
where it's cold too....
kind of makes me a more of land person

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It's fantastic! The ending is appropriate for someone averse to swimming. I love to swim and used to dream about being a dolphin or mermaid.


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Underwater

I want to breath in water,
and feel it in my hair.
I want to go down under,
and not need the air.
I want to explore a world,
different from my own;


I want to twirl,
and loop,
and follow.
The currents
through the
ocean blue.


Maybe I'll become a mermaid,
and grow a scaly tail.
I'll get to live in water,
without a single care.


But then my lungs
start to burn,
and I have to get
back to the air.


(its kind of ironic that I wrote this because, I'm not a big fan of swimming lol)

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